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Princess

The Poetry Thread

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I actually wrote this as lyrics, but it's a poem nevertheless.

Promising (a Lie)

Eyes dripping with longing,

Mouth sweet and full

Lead me away to a

Place none other go.

My body your channel,

To love and to pain

Though mostly the latter

Is all that you'll gain

Promising to love

Be loved and love still

The truth that love

Can never be real.

This is the case

I promise to you

This is my lie

and that much is true.

Lead me away to a

Place through the mist

Your god gave you hope

I gave a promise.

Promising to love

Be loved and love still

The truth that love

Can never be real

Almost sadistic

Perhaps that is true

But this is the lie

I promise to you.

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Rogue

Wow. that's really awesome :D

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Mara

Nice idea... I should put all my poetry online somewhere...

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E-wing

ok i don't really know what happened but i was feeling a little sad and lonely tonight as i try to finish some astro physics work. well i got distracked. my mind started to wonder. and for some reson i don't understand i sat down a did this. i think it's a poem but the poems i normally wright are short and ryming so i don't know for sure. it could be just rambleing.....

well anyway here it is..... tell me what you people think.... ok?

Alone

Do you know what it?s like to be alone?

Do you know what it feels like to have a single true friend?

What it feels like when it seems there is but one person at your side?

To lose that friend do to their inattentiveness or your own?

Then to drift until a new friend comes only to have it happen again?

Do you know what it?s like to be alone?

Do you know what it feels like to have a loving family?

What it feels like to be bonded by blood to someone until death?

To have that death be theirs and not yours?

Then to sit and wonder who and when the next one will be lost?

Do you know what it?s like to be alone?

Do you know what it feels like to share a room with someone?

What it feels like to share the place you call home?

To always have someone near regardless of desire?

Then to have them move away leaving you to yourself?

Do you know what it?s like to be alone?

Do you know what it feels like to truly care for someone?

What it feels like to give them your heart?

To say that you love them and to hear it returned?

Then to see them leave you because they stop feeling that way?

Do you know what it?s like to be alone?

Do you what it feels like to need talk to someone?

What it feels like to be troubled and have no one notice?

To force the issue into a conversation?

Then to be ignored as if you said nothing of importance?

Do you know what it?s like to be alone?

Do you know what it feels like to walk the path of shadows?

What it feels like to stand at the edge of the darkness that is true despair?

To wish to return fully to the light of hope?

Then to find that you have lingered so long that you can neither rise nor fall?

Do you know what it?s like to be alone?

I do.

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Brumak

Figured I'd revive this thread...too...seeing as how I made a poem-ish thing tonight.

A time where existence is meaningless

A place where meaningless is everything

An aspect of truth where everything is miscontrued

A false reality where everything is pure

A purity where sins are holy

The dimension where all things matter only to the creator

The creator of a world his own

Where else can truth be perfectly mixed with wishes

Where is there another realm where thoughts rule all others

Where....besides a dream...

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Brumak

I've been havin a few weird things jump in my head lately...so I'll jot them down here.

I've had this dream...of dreaming a dream...

A dream where dreams collide

A nightmare of slumber...this dreadful sleep...

Where no place is safe to hide

On the winds of sleep...these gusts of fiction...

An aroma so pleasently acrid

A decadence of thought...perversions of wishes...

The volatile mind once placid

---

Sleep...an alternate reality in a meaningless existence

The dreams of a stagnant life-form leave nothing but wishes and shattered hopes

Billions of mortals, each silently screaming in slumber

Wishing for peace, fantasizing impossibilities

These insignificant left-over thoughts, useful only for the mind to recreate

Without them, without dreams, we become hollow

With them, the make-believe world of a non-existant reality becomes falsely plausible

We succumb to clinging onto mortality

Why can slumber not be peaceful

Why must it be tormented with torrents of lies

Every dream brings one closer to insanity....a small step toward oblivion.

---

Random and weird...yes...and they flood my mind when I'm attempting to sleep >_<

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Princess

A Moment of Melancholy

I sit wondering

How many times

You?ll break

My aching heart.

How can I

Love you so

And feel

So hurt today.

I trusted you

When you said

You didn?t

Want me hurt.

Yet it seems

That every day

Something happens

That hurts more.

For three years

I?ve waited for

You to

Let me in.

Now when you

Need me most

I?m told

To stay away.

Things won?t get

Easier anytime soon

We need

To capitalize now.

Love is precious

I will fight

For you

The Man I Love.

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Chickenman

So my creative writing professor is a poet, which means I have to write a ton of poetry. And I didn't, so now it's all makeup work that I'm struggling to get in in the last three weeks of school. Below are the first three poems I've ever written that weren't dirty limericks.

Poem #1

There’s a place I can’t quite place on a map

Where the group with the funny name is killing the group whose name I can’t remember

I remember learning a little about it

I remember signing a petition, once

Remember berating others for not taking notice

For expressing their boring problems while others die.

Just to sate my smug sense of superiority

I haven’t donated a god-damned cent.

I guess that’s what it means to live in the First World

Concern yourself with an international crisis

But only until the end of the commercial break

Oh Simon Cowell, why not turn your acid soaked tongue upon us

Rather than that glorified karaoke singer

Berate us,

Put us in our place

For thinking we have problems while drinking water from a tap.

Poem #2

I want to be Thurston Moore

I want to innovate

I want to inspire

I want to be acclaimed

I want.

I want to be a wild man

I want to be a poet

I want to be a rock and roll star

I wish some dweeby kid envied me

I want to earn a biography

I want the youthful zest for life you have after half a century

That I don’t possess in my teenage years.

I want to be a Sonic Youth

I want to start a Teenage Riot

Also, his wife is gorgeous.

I mean damn.

Poem #3

Hey there kid, could you spend a moment?

No? I understand you have things to do.

I wish I did.

Feel free to avert your eyes

As I dig through the trash for a half-empty cup of Dunkin Donuts coffee

Mocha, vente, latte, de-caffeinated, they’re just words

Beggars can’t be choosers

There’s a half of a donut, and I’ve got reason to be thankful.

Spare a moment?

I don’t want money. I just want to talk to someone who doesn’t think me subhuman.

I can see you’re busy. That iphone isn’t going to listen to itself

You’ve got 5000 bittorrented songs.

I’ve got the sounds of the city to lull me to sleep

You talk to your girlfriends about shopping for shoes

Why do you need more than one pair? I’ve doing just fine with these tatters around my ankles.

You avert your eyes.

I want to talk to someone who doesn’t think me subhuman

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Bad furday

*applauds* :D

If you had to read 1 or 3 out loud to the class, I think you'd be able to hear a pin drop. I like that. :)

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Chickenman

I actually have to read one today. Which one do you suggest? :p

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Princess

Read number 3

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Mara

Those are all great, Chicken. :)

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Princess

I wrote this for my Grandma's funeral.

A Dedication to my Grandma

By Amanda Kay Mussell

Though we’re here to say goodbye

In our hearts you’ll always lie

And while we find it hard to let you go

In a better place you are, we know

You saw the beauty in every day life

It helped you through times of sorrow and strife

In your life, you fought the good fight

You fought that fight with all your might

You always took care of everyone else

As easily as taking a pulse

You never let go of being a nurse

Taking care of friends and family, for better or worse

Then it became time for us to take care of you

We did the best that we could do

Then God called you home to His eternal bliss

We said goodbye with a hug and a kiss

Finally reunited with your true love

We know that you watch down on us from above

We know you’ll be watching us every day

For you’ve joined the angels so faraway

Though you’re not near, you’re still around

With us in thoughts and sound

Whether through song or the sight of a flower

We know you’re near, in the peace of a rain shower

When times get bad and we’re filled with fear

We know you’ll make it better with an angel’s whisper in our ear

Helping us through the good times and the bad

Knowing you don’t want us to be sad

You’ve become our angel to adore

Waiting for us on God’s golden shore

Grandpa met you at heaven’s door

And told you “My dear, your suffering is no more.”

So, while we miss you so

We knew it was your time to go

As you sit in heaven’s splendor

You’re still our great defender

With a tear we say good-bye

We look for you now in the sky

And while our lives won’t be the same

We will forever carry your flame

Watch down on us Grandma

From heaven above

We will miss you forever

As we say good-bye with our undying love

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