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Princess

Who am I?

I thought I knew

I thought I knew what I wanted

Then something happened

A spark

It seems so insignificant

But it can start an inferno

A raging hot inferno

A promise broken

Two broken hearts

A flooding river

Of tears

Drowning

In conflict with myself

Being torn between two

Slowly going down

Can this spark start a fire?

Can a broken heart be healed?

Can someone save me?

I'm so confused.

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Bad furday

*melts a plastic doll of Princess to a plastic ear of corn*

There! Cornfused! :D

Anyway, it's good! :)

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Princess

Thanks Furday. I find that when I'm stressed that just sitting down and writing help a lot.

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Princess

Does the spark part remind anyone else of the NJO? As I wrote it I had that scene with Threepio and the spark flash into my mind.

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Andy

It didn't, but now you mention it, it does :)

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Princess

The things that go through my mind during psychology class.

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Pandora

I find that when I'm stressed that just sitting down and writing help a lot.

I'm the same way. Writing's a good way to really step back and work out your feelings.

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CorSec

Aye..tis deeper than it looks..lots to think about :)

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Princess

If only you knew CorSec.

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Princess

A tear

Runs down my cheek

My doubts

Come to the surface

Crying

As we try to work things out

Wondering

If it'll happen

My heart

Breaking as we talk

My soul

Being ripped from me

Is it worth it?

This broken heart

Will I ever

Be the same?

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Sentrosi

these voices ring in my mind

telling me im wasting my time

shes not worth it

dont give your heart away

but ive lost it...

its gone

its hers...

these feelings inside

everyone tells me to hide

but i cant, i wont

she started a fire inside of me

my soul cries out to see

just another glipmse

of her smiling at me..

(months later)

how can she do this to me...

oh baby cant you see

i gave you my heart

my soul

and now you want me to leave you alone

you say we will still be friends

i thought we'd be together till the end

all she says is goodbye...

cause she doesnt want to see me cry

she says it hurts her too

but i dont see a tear pass her cheek... no..

i wont, i cant let her leave this way

im gonna find her and im gonna do it my way

i cant let her go... i wont... i cant...

she has to be with me she said she was in love with me

the pain inside comes in to haunt me at night till

i dont feel alright...

sometimes at night i feel as if

i want to end my life...

cause there aint no life with out you...

i cant live my life without you

this pain youve given me is sendin me

straight to hell...

im going insane as the weeks go bye

startin to cry when i see your picture inside

of my head and its making me wish i was dead

(a couple of years later)

we're talking again

she says shes happy to be my friend

but i dont see the point... im not happy with this

i want more this isnt close to what i wished.

she called me tonight... said she missed me tonight...

we not that close anymore and she appears suddenly at my door

in tears cause she says she cant take this no more...

she falls in my arms... and continues to cry

i take her aside... and hold her in my arms..

(ive dreamed of this day but i didnt want it to happen this way)

we got in a fight and then she realized things werent right..

shes tellin me she loves me and she wants to spend the night

shes talking of marriage and how things will be alright

i cant help thinking of if it will happen again she leave me again

and all that pain i was in..

but im happy now... shes in my life... i put the blades away

no point in ending my life... at least not tonight but who knows what tomorrow will hold...

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Princess

Very interesting.

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Princess

This is now the poetry thread. Let your hidden poet free.

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Princess

I feel alive again

Something inside of me has set me free

I feel free again

Somewhere deep insides I have met my inner peace

I feel as if a thousand pound weight has been lifted off of my shoulders

Because of how I feel when I'm with you

You've shown me the light

When I was trapped in the dark

I have something to do now

As soon as I find something out from you

This thing could change my life

Change it for the better

You're my lifeguard

You saved me from drowning in myself

From drowning in my sorrow

And for that I thank you.

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Sentrosi

i sit and ponder late at night

is what im doing really right

falling in love all over again

the past has come to haunt me again

i kiss someone else wishing it was you

and all the time knowing... this could hurt you

i feel as if im being pulled in all directions at once

being torn apart.. from within....

loving her, kissing you,

im starting to think... im missing you..

im not in love with you and dont

want to hurt you...

i am here for you as a friend

as more sometimes but in the end

im hers...and she knows it...

you should know it. too

not that i dont care about you

but because... i cant give my heart to you

you see i gave it to her along time ago

way before i even knew you

i cant promise you anything

not my time, my love, not anything

im sorry ive wasted your time...

writing these rhymes must be hurting you

i didnt mean to just use you

to pass the time as slowly i walked the line

waiting to here the words from her ive been

waiting for...

so i could walk out that door...

and hold her forever more

forgive me for my deceit

i never knew that we would me

forgive me for the time i spent

the time we went and did those

things we liked to do..

and in all truth i was just using you

ill understand if you dont want to speak to me

for doing what i did to you.

im sorry ... i dont expect you to ever forgive me.

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Sentrosi

I lie in the darkness

waiting for fear...

hoping for weakness before

i strike out from behind the shadows..

i wound quickly and it never heals

it festers until it consumes you..

and it will consume you..

i never leave shallow wounds... they go straight for your soul...

making you feel as if your losing control...

of your life..

of your mind...

and of reality.

you must accept the pain that i am...

that i give...

to accept yourself...

to live your life the way you wish

you must first live through my kiss..

what am I?

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Princess

you vampire

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Sentrosi

from the poem... but very funny prin... im not a bat either..

the answer is love

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Princess

Love, how true. But i like my answer better. :D

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chozen

I thought it was that thing out of that batman film..

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Sentrosi

no thats a riddle this was a poem... lol

and you know what a vamp does prin... so you knew that that wasnt it... but if you would like me to remind you i can... ;)

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chozen

vamps suck blood..wow stenrosi i never knew you was a bo... never mind.

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