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i 've taken chozens advice so c below

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Here's a good technique.. Post a 3 paragraphs at a time.. So the reader will actually read it there and then.. A day after post another 3 paragraphs.. So on..

There's no way i can be bothered to read all that, but if it was only in paragraphs of 3 it would be so much more readable... Do it like that, k?

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Ok then:

Prologue

In the deaths of the ice world Hoth, Kyle Katarn woke with a start. A huge pain rushed over him, through the force, it was the death of someone he never new: Anakin Solo. Kyle didn?t now whose presence he felt, but after a few minutes he felt his former mentor?s, Luke Skywalker, grief. His wife Jan Ors (she kept her maiden name) suddenly woke, and Kyle could here the crying of his 9-year-old son Morgan, named after his grandfather. Morgan was force sensitive, like his father, and Kyle felt his pain. He sensed his former mentor?s grief again but this time it was worse.

?Jan we?re going to find Luke, I?ll need to arm myself, then I?ll meet you in the Eagle?s Talon.?

?Why Kyle?? she said soothing Morgan, who was in her arms, ?Daddy what happened?? Morgan said, but Kyle felt something else, he heard footsteps, he counted 10 people, 4 not felt in the force, Yuuzhan Vong and Peace Brigade he thought, and ushered Jan to hurry, he reached for his lightsaber, and pulled his ancient Bryar Pistol towards him with the force. He threw Jan her pistol and Morgan his training saber on loan from the former Jedi Academy.

As the footsteps grew closer Kyle stepped sideways into the corridor, using his first power pack, killing all of the peace brigade personnel. He looked and saw that there were still 4 Yuuhzan Vong there; he reached for his lightsaber, as he saw the Vong arm themselves with their amphistaffs. Kyle activated his lightsaber, as the Yuuhzan Vong ran to meet him. He put his lightsaber through the unarmoured warrior, cutting him in two. The next warrior came towards him the other two close behind him, ?Force don?t fail me now? Kyle muttered, cutting off the warrior?s head off, he was wondering why they weren?t wearing vondum crab armour. ?Die? Kyle muttered, decapitating the last two.

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Kyle ran to the Eagle?s Talon (a modified Y2400 Corellian light freighter) and jumped aboard, here he took the controls and told Jan to arm the lasers, as once they were out of Hoth?s orbit Kyle spotted three squadrons of corral skippers and a Yuuzhan Vong world ship, ?Jan prepare for hyperspace jump,? Kyle shouted over the alarms of the rocking ?Where to Kyle?? she shouted back, ?Anywhere but here Jan? he said fingers running over the ships controls. ?But I'm in the gunner turret Kyle,? she said as the alarms stopped ?Give me the co-ordinates then.? Kyle replied. Jan gave him random co-ordinates, then fired four lasers, all absorbed with the `skips, voids, suddenly the skip blew up, ?Who did that?? Kyle and Jan said in unison, and heard a small whistle from the lower turret, ?Morgan what have I said about playing with then lasers? Jan said, frowning, ?Kids a good shot though isn?t he,? Kyle said, laughing. The remaining coral skippers followed the ship, plasma spurting from the living ships, Jan saw the `skips voids appear and three lasers enter them; she quickly fired four times, causing the enemy to swerve to avoid, and crash into the last `skip. Kyle started to count down for the jump to hyperspace ?5, 4, 3, 2, 1, mark? Jan closed her eyes and braced herself for the jump to hyperspace, soon after retiring to her quarters.

A few hours later the Eagle?s Talon arrived at Coruscant, and Kyle, looking out the main view port, felt for his mentor?s presence, he didn?t feel it, but he felt something else, a strange feeling in the force, and could tell Morgan felt it too. ?Jan do you remember the Valley of the Jedi?s co-ordinates,? Kyle asked, and as she said them, punched them into the ships computer, Kyle remembered that he had to ask Luke about what the pain was. He looked into the main viewport again, and sat down. Kyle felt another thing through the force, and he closed his eyes and went into a trance. In his vision Kyle saw the Valley of the Jedi, and a Yuuzhan Vong going through it, then another and another. Kyle awakened to the hear Jan ask, ?What?s happening?? but ignored her, ?Jan we?re going to have to find Morgan a babysitter-? Kyle said, ?But why Kyle? Jan asked again, ?Ok then Morgan, Jan, I?m dropping you off on Endor, you can stay there, I need to sort this out myself.? Kyle replied, Jan hesitated again ?but-?

?Damn it Jan, just trust me.? Kyle retorted, ?Ok, but at least contact Luke first.? Jan said, ?You need to find out what?s wrong with him?

?Fine Jan,? Kyle replied, and used the ships locater to find Luke, found he was leaving Coruscant, ?Katarn to Skywalker, Katarn to Skywalker Do you read? Copy?

?Skywalker here, Kyle it?s great to hear you, after we heard about Hoth, Me and Mara feared for the worst-?

?Sorry Skywalker, but I?ve got to cut this short, I fear that the Valley of the Jedi has been invaded by the Vong, and they are creating force sensitive Vong,?

?Damn, it?s bad enough with the Remanent, but the Vong is a completely different thing.?

?I?m going in there to sort this out once and for all Skywalker,?

?May the force be with you, Kyle?

?Yeah, you too Luke.?

?Over and Out? As Kyle heard Luke click off, he programmed the co-ordinates to Endor in the hyperdrive, and the Eagle?s Talon jumped into hyperspace. Kyle then went into his cabin.

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Meanwhile, Elsewhere?

?Command Me Warmaster? Sta Anor, A kinsman of Nom Anor, said.

?Report, Executor,? Tsavong Lah, Yuuhzan Vong Warmaster replied, ?We have conquered the infidel planet Hoth, Warmaster.? Sta Anor said.

?And of the Jeedai, Executor,?

?There seemed to be none, Warmaster, but-?

?But what? Tsavong Lah retorted,

?We lost contact with a group of Peace Brigade and Warriors, Warmaster; soon after an infidel abomination left for unknown regions Warmaster we fear the famed Jeedai Kyle Katarn was onboard.?

?Who let him escape, Executor, they shall be sacrificed,? Tsavong Lah said, anger growing in his voice. Sta Anor knew not to anger the Warmaster ?The pilot and warrior Ratef Charant Warmaster,? Sta Anor said to get the hasty reply of ?Bring him to me?

?It shall be done Warmaster? Sta Anor said and left the room quickly.

Chapter 1

Kyle Katarn sighed. He hated having to pilot by himself, well nearly. He was flying with a droid companion, R6-P89, given to him by the Ewok?s, and although the lasers were set to auto fire on the any targeted ship he was still worried. Since the Battle of Endor the Ewok's had started using New Republic Technology, and the Eagle?s Talon was loaded with concussion missiles and explosives. He also had a Ewok fighter escort, which were following him like hawks. ?This is the Eagle?s Talon to Forest Leader, I request permission to jump to The Valley now, good luck and may the force be with you.?

?This is Forest Leader to the Eagle?s Talon permission granted, May the force be with you to Kyle.? Forest leader?s mechanical voice was a lot like a droids, but it allowed the Ewok to speak basic. ?Jump on my mark Eagle?s Talon, 3, 2, Mark.?

Kyle turned to his droid companion ?R6-P89, how many Yuuzhan Vong ships do you spot in the area surrounding the valley? The droid?s reply came on the ships screen. ?THERE ARE MANY SHIPS, SIR, 30 SQUADRONS OF CORAL SKIPPERS, 2 YUUZHAN VONG INTERDICTORS AND A WORLDSHIP.? Kyle grimaced, ?R6-P89 what are the odds of survival?? A split second latter the droid?s reply came on the ships screen ?THERE IS A 25% CHANCE OF SUCCESS SIR.? Kyle thought for a moment, ?How much chance of success would there be with Jan here?? Kyle asked, ?45%? the droid beeped. Kyle sighed and wondered if Jan would have been helpful here, ?Too late to go back now? he muttered to himself.

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Domain Lah Worldship

Tsavong Lah sat in front of Sta Anor and asked, ?How go our projects at the Valley of the Jeedai Executor?? Sta Anor turned to face the Warmaster, spoke ?Very Well indeed Warmaster, although we think that the famous Jeedai Kyle Katarn is on his way? Tsavong Lah considered what Sta Anor had just said ?Is this good, Executor?? He asked, ?We are not sure Warmaster though we think that he may well stop us.? Sta Anor said, ?Does this Jeedai have enough power to stop more than a million Yuuhzan Vong?? the Warmaster commented, ?I think not? Sta Anor said ?But what would happen if he blew up the planet, Warmaster?? Tsavong Lah thought again, ?I have heard stories about an infidel weapon of mass destruction they called the Death Star, that destroyed an infidel planet Alderaan, but I was not sure if they were true? Sta Anor told the Warmaster that someone had a holocam recording of this happening, which he had seen. ?We hope against this Warmaster, but it is not impossible.? The Warmaster considered this again, then said to the executor, ?Get me my villip, executor, then leave my chambers.? Sta Anor bowed then said, ?It will be done, Warmaster.? Sta Anor turned and left the room. A few minutes later Tsavong Lah sat in front of his villip talking to the priest Harrar. ?Warmaster, it is an honour? Harrar said, bowing, ?Our campaign here is going well, we have so far enhanced a pack of force sensitive Yuuzhan Vong, but we require you?re orders shall we should enhance more of our glorious race, or keep the one group The Raptors and teach them the full power of this force?? Tsavong Lah wondered momentarily ?The Raptors?? Harrar quickly spoke to the Warmaster ?We have called them the Raptors after an ancient animal that lived in this galaxy; it would hunt in packs, and kill anything that got in its way.? The Warmaster looked straight at Harrar and asked ?My orders for you, Priest, are to continue training these Raptors, see how well they fight compared to the Jeedai and then train more.? Tsavong Lah stroked the villips top and it inverted. Tsavong Lah nodded at one of his guards, which took the villip away. The Warmaster watched his guard leave, then withdrew to his chambers.

Chapter 2

Kyle pulled down the hyperspace lever, and then Eagle?s Talon leapt back into real space. Kyle?s timing was just right; he came out of hyperspace just as the major Yuuzhan Vong ships leapt into the unknown. Kyle looked around, and the R4 unit whistled, He knew what it meant. Around him were coral skippers around him, surrounding the one massive Vong ship, a worldship. Suddenly 3 coral skippers withdrew form their orbit around the worldship, and headed straight for the Eagle?s Talon. ?R4 we have company? Kyle said, bracing himself as a plasma missile came towards him. ?R4 take evasive action,? The modified Y-2400 Corellian light freighter suddenly dived downwards, and then jerked upwards again, a manoeuvre the Millennium Falcon made famous. As Kyle turned the ship on its axis, so that it was facing the coral skipper, and fired 3 short bursts from the ships cannons, then 3 from the upper and lower gun turrets. The coral skipper?s voids could not absorb all the lasers, and it exploded in a fireball. Meanwhile the 2nd coral skipper leapt straight ahead off the Eagle?s Talon and fired a short-range plasma missile. The Eagle?s Talon shook violently and an alarm bell sounded, luckily the Talon?s shields had absorbed the hit, but the coral skipper was still there. Kyle turned the ship round, so it was facing upwards, and converted all power to throttle, the Talon suddenly lurched upwards, and left the coral skipper far behind. ?Eat my dust, Vong scum!? Kyle said, but Kyle?s happiness was short lived, R6-P89 whistled a warning, and the remaining coral skippers shot past him.

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OMG? Look Forget what i said. :roll:

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Kyle converted all the power to lasers and shields, but the Talon?s lasers were still charging, ?R4 see if you can boost the power, we need to destroy these skips, before they destroy us!? Kyle heard the R4 whistle again, but triumphantly. The lasers were back on line, Kyle went in behind the first coral skipper, and fired 3 short laser blasts, then another 3. The skip exploded, and Coral peppered the ship. R4 whistled again, ?I?m saving the proton torpedoes for something, else.? Kyle explained, and R4 beeped in a low tone ?You?ll find out later!? Kyle said back to R4. The 3rd coral skipper was returning for reinforcements, but as Kyle faced it, the Corral Skipper turned around, facing the Talon, and came straight for Kyle. Kyle shot 3 laser blasts, which were absorbed by the ships voids, and a split second later launched a proton torpedo, the ships voids were busy absorbing the lasers, and couldn?t take the proton torpedo as well. The ship blew up, leaving just a few skips and the worldship, between him and the valley. ?R4 convert all power to shields and throttle, we need to get past these quick.? Kyle said, and the ship shot forward, past the Vong.

***

A few hours later Kyle let the R4 unit find him somewhere to land. ?R4, I never asked you this, but what is your name?? Kyle said, the R4 unit whistled a reply, Kyle glanced at the translator, and laughed at the R4 unit?s reply ?I DO NOT HAVE A DESIGNATION SIR, I?M USUALLY JUST CALLED R4? Kyle replied to the droid ?Would you like a name R4??

Kyle looked at the translator again laughed, ?IT WOULDN?T MATTER TO ME SIR, I AM JUST A DROID.?

?Well R4 you new designation is...? Kyle paused for a moment, thinking of a name for his little droid friend, ?is, Kawasi, after a planet destroyed long ago by war.? Kyle leant back and relaxed; he had landed a few kilometres from the valley, in bushy undergrowth, and had disguised the Talon with a camouflaged net from his survival pack. Kyle looked around him, taking in his surroundings. He had landed at least fifty feet below the planets natural surface. He new he couldn?t use the force to help him jump that high. Instead he reached into his survival park and pulled a grappling hook; he swung it around his head with one arm, and then let it go. It got a good twenty-five foot up, but Kyle had to use the force to propel it to the surface and find a root or stump for it to stay on. Once the hook was steady Kyle started to climb the rocky wall, making foot holds with his lightsaber. Once he was ten feet from the ground, he slowly levitated Kawasi to a ledge. Kyle again cut more handholds with his saber, and creating little ledges every ten feet, and levitated the droid on to them. After a standard hour, Kyle had reached the surface of the planet, and realised that Kawasi would have to stay there and guard the ship. ?If you get a scratch on the ship I?ll?.?

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He didn?t get to finish his sentence ?Sith-Spit? he cursed, as he drew his lightsaber. Three Yuuzhan Vong warriors ran over the mound in fornt of Kyle, armed with amphistaffs and wearing Vondum crab armour. Kyle new no weak spots of this armour, and threw out his hand in front of the warriors, calling on the force. Bright Blue force lightning flew out from his fingertips, the Yuuzhan Vong screamed in agony. The force lightning was still flying from his finger tips, although the Yuuzhan Vong were dead. Kyle withdrew his hand and the last traces of the force lightning vanished into thin air. Once again gathering the force from around him, Kyle force pushed the three bodies into the cavern where the Talon was, and watched as they fell. Kyle force-jumped again, this time leaving Kawasi behind him. Kyle ran towards where the Valley was, but was stopped in his tracks, he winced and fell to the ground, winded. Kyle attempted to get up again, but something hit him hard in the stomach once again. The last thing Kyle heard was the snap-hiss of a lightsaber igniting, and then he passed out.

***

?What shall we do with him,? a voice said, Kyle stirred and tried getting up, but his captor jabbed in the leg with an electro-jabber, causing him to stumble and fall. Kyle used an old Jedi trick, pretending to have passed out he shut his eyes, and lay there listening to his captors. ?I dunno Farin, leave him here for them.? The man spat the last word, as if he was spitting out bantha-dung. Farin, Kyle presumed, spoke again. ?No we may be different to him, but I can sense he could be useful, can?t you Kin.? The other man spoke again, ?I am but a learner of our ways Farin, you are the master.? Kyle imagined that these men were both dark Jedi, after hearing the one named Farin speak off himself and the one called Kin being different to Kyle. ?Hey Jedi, wake up.? Kyle got up once again and found nothing to bring him back down again. ?Emperor?s black bones? he swore, as he turned around. The two men must have been Reborn warriors from Dessan?s era. He looked around his surrounding?s, seeing lightsabers erected on shelves. He recognized some as those of great sith-lords. ?Emperor?s black bones? he swore again, as he saw the lightsaber of Darth Vader, Luke Skywalker?s father. He also saw the lightsaber of the Sith lords he had killed. There was Dessan?s lightsaber, Jerec?s lightsaber, and many more. He looked around himself again seeing lightsabers he did not recognize, an elongated lightsaber with two activation switches, another lightsaber handle that had been curved round. Kyle looked at his captor?s again, ?Where on Alderaan?s space dust did you get all these?? He asked, Farin answered his question. ?We both go around to where these lightsabers are rumoured to be, then if we find them we keep ?em.? Kyle gathered the force, and reached out to the saber with two activation switches. He pulled it towards him, and then pressed the two activation switches, two crimson blades ignited from the each end of the saber, with a synchronised snap-hiss. Another two lightsaber blades ignited a crimson blade from Farin, and a bright orange from Kin. ?Put the weapon down, Jedi, we do not want this mistake to be your last.?

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Thats it so far, can u tell me what u think please

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